Thursday night Po!
Avenue A
sitting on this gray step
worn old from life
i see the world at its finest
dog on a chain hating
his sports coat wearing owner
who calls his wife honey,
keeps a blonde on call
because her child must eat
and the thrill is
most definitely not gone
boy across the way
walks likes he’s ninety
calls his baby’s momma
“whore”
as he hustles
on gang controlled corners
then is shot stone, dead
within ten
minutes
rising up
i have seen enough
to wonder why
the old time singers lied
things always remain
the same
ljh/2011

This is great!
Thanks Brian..just a simple observation..
A simple observation that you made your own and made beautiful. And that’s what great poetry is all about.
what a wonderful thing to say.. Thank you Brian
The second section is my fav
Lovely rhythm throughout
Thank you kindly!!
There is that edge
No tnt this time..just a bird’s eye view of life.
Thank you muchly!
I don’t know there seemed to be plenty of fire
thanks for the reality slap. well done.
Just seeing it as it happens..
this is good observing/writing/synthesizing/poetry. well done Lynne. continue…
Thank you BITD!!
keep on po’ ing, FPP.
what’s a world without Po, right?
Thanks Sara!!
perceptive, eye-opening observations