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House of Ziggy

First thing people notice is the angle of the house.
After a brief glance in that direction, one’s neck tends to stay at a slant for hours.
Perhaps the tilt is due to the weight of the residents thoughts.
Aluminum foil for curtains always has newcomers perplexed.
The second from bottom porch step is still painted red, and threatens to unhinge.
I rap on the no-screen door, and the sound has that tin drum echo.
As I’m beckoned to enter, the aroma of last night’s trout escorts me into the room.
No need to speak, he knows it’s me.

Ziggy has the ability to see my thoughts before they are completed.
I know the first time we met, his stare counted the holes in my heart, scrapes on my back.

Today was a visit for the mother lode of advice. Will I be happy again?
I drag the backless chair from its spot behind the itchy blanket which served as a door.
A pencil is perched in the Medusa spirals falling from his crown.
Ever present toothpick vibrating between his smoked too many something lips.
I did not have to say anything. He knew what I knew before I knew.
As I look around the room, something catches my eye on the table.

He withdrew a pencil from the mass of snakes, wets the tip and speaks.
“Before I answer your burning question, I have one for you”.

Now the sweat is forming under my arms, I know I look off balance, like the house.
The wise one is asking me for help. He should know already what lurks in my head.
He refolds the paper on his plywood tabletop, looks at me and asks,
“What is a three letter word for dog?”
Like a kid I blurt out, “Cur”.

He leans back in his has-a-back chair, winks at me, re-wets the lead and replies,

“Stay away from those and you will always be happy”

(This is a true story from my early 20′s. The image is not of Ziggy but is a remarkable likeness of him)

First Published at Red Fez online zine.

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39 Comments on “House of Ziggy

  1. on thehomefrontandbeyond
    January 3, 2013

    wise words–do we always recognize them though?

  2. catchupouring
    January 3, 2013

    I remember reading this on a few times Lynn…
    @ on thehomefrontand beyond…not always the first time…

    • free penny press
      January 3, 2013

      I should have listened to Ziggy closer.. saved me a whole lotta woe in my life..

  3. wordsurfer
    January 3, 2013

    What a wonderful scene and I love that it’s true, even though it would work as a made-up image as well!

    • free penny press
      January 3, 2013

      He was the coolest person I have ever met.. If he’s still alive he’d be in his 70′s now..

  4. Teresa Cleveland Wendel
    January 3, 2013

    Oh, this is remarkable. My neck will remain at a slant for the rest of the day. You have quite a flair for telling a story through a character sketch. I hope you’ll regale us with more of these.

    • free penny press
      January 3, 2013

      Thanks Teresa.. this is an older write but decided to post here.. Glad you liked it :-)

  5. Brigitte
    January 3, 2013

    Lynne, this is good, good stuff here. It is a poetic story. Loved it. You are way talented, my friend.

    • free penny press
      January 3, 2013

      Thanks so much Brigitte.. when it was published I was shocked they tagged it as “poetic”, hell I was shocked they accepted it..lol

  6. lifeonwry.com
    January 3, 2013

    Okay, that was just awesome. Freaking fabulous writing.

    • free penny press
      January 3, 2013

      Thanks muchly.. You would have enjoyed Ziggy.. he was a seer I think.. smart as a whip..

  7. Susan Bahr
    January 3, 2013

    Awesome. Simply awesome.

  8. freddiejay
    January 3, 2013

    I wish I could write like that, beautiful and poetic

    • free penny press
      January 3, 2013

      Ahh Freddie the way you write is good.. it’s you, your thoughts, heartbeats, experiences..I wish I could write like Justin Torres (“We the Animals” author)
      Thanks so much!!

  9. Heather @ SugarDish(Me)
    January 3, 2013

    Lynne this is LOVE-ly!! Seriously. I was reading this and I was IN IT, you know what I mean?

    • free penny press
      January 3, 2013

      Thanks so much Heather.. this is one of my fondest memories of those “younger” days :-)

  10. A gripping life
    January 3, 2013

    Lynne, this soulful. You write so beautifully and effortlessly, your descriptions are beyond poetic. I feel like I’m right there with you. I can even smell the room. I’m transported.
    An amazing piece of writing, not to mention the coolest of stories.

    • free penny press
      January 3, 2013

      The memories I have of sitting in his kitchen are so strong it’s as if it were yesterday and not 25 yrs ago.. I wish I had of taken his words more seriously..
      thank you for your kind words ;-)

  11. A gripping life
    January 3, 2013

    * is soulful.

  12. Life With The Top Down
    January 3, 2013

    Such power in this piece. I felt like I was right there with Ziggy. I wouldn’t recognize a cur in my 20′s if it bit me…which it did. I only saw puppies.

    • free penny press
      January 3, 2013

      You and me both.. just goes to show we need to listen better..lol
      Thanks so much for reading!!

  13. Enchanted Seashells
    January 3, 2013

    This was really good!

  14. El Guapo
    January 3, 2013

    Everyone needs to meet a Ziggy, at least once.

  15. chrisbkm
    January 3, 2013

    Fantastic.

  16. Unconfirmed Bachelorette
    January 4, 2013

    You make writing look easy. I have never heard the word cur. I always learn new things from you, Lynne.

    • free penny press
      January 4, 2013

      cur [kur]
      noun
      1.
      a mongrel dog, especially a worthless or unfriendly one.
      2.
      a mean, cowardly person.

      met any of them?

  17. gregorychankins
    January 5, 2013

    I wish you didn’t stop. I want to read more.

  18. A Dog With Fleas
    January 6, 2013

    The writing and descriptives just draw you in. What an excellent character-read!

    • free penny press
      January 7, 2013

      Thanks so much.. I wish I had of spent more than a handful of times in his company for he was so wise and interesting..

  19. Single Malt Monkey
    January 27, 2013

    Cool story.

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